The Eternal Beauty

It was love at first sight
The view in front of me was just so bright
Oh! Such a beauty she was!
Looking at her, I was so lost

Swathed in white, she was nothing but grace
To explain her beauty, I couldn't think of a phrase
She was resplendent and ethereal,
Just looking at her felt surreal
letting her beauty engulf my every pore
I was but a tiny speck
Seemed like she gave me a peck
In awe I was of the Creator!
A million profound thoughts running through my head
The Ocean sure was majestic
And just looking at her made me feel ecstatic. 

Comments

  1. Raj_aficionados22 January 2016 at 21:32

    That's a brilliant one! Keep it up!

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  2. J D22 January 2016 at 21:36

    I need a vacation right NOW!
    Very well written..

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    1. Nanditha Ravindar23 January 2016 at 10:15

      Haha. Just take a week off and come here. I shall show you around!

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  3. Unknown22 January 2016 at 22:12

    Vera level! You have brought out your best and I know there is much more I can expect from you. Simple and elegant.

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    1. Nanditha Ravindar23 January 2016 at 10:15

      You're always such a source of encouragement! Thanks, Rach <3

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  4. Magdalina22 January 2016 at 23:07

    Thank you so much for this delightful piece of poetry. You sure do give words a makeover. <3

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    1. Nanditha Ravindar23 January 2016 at 10:17

      I still remember our early college days. Nostalgia. Thanks, man! Means a lot :)

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  5. Nishitha Prabhu23 January 2016 at 08:13

    Wonderful!!!
    Awaiting ur next master piece...

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  6. Unknown24 January 2016 at 00:35

    Amazing work love!! The flow as i ever say is magnificent.

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  7. Unknown25 January 2016 at 22:31

    Some real strong words there. Simply beautiful Nandu :)

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  8. Unknown26 January 2016 at 07:42

    Beautifully written. Keep at it Nan! Looking out for more :)

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  9. Anonymous30 January 2016 at 07:12

    Loved it! :)

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  10. Unknown31 January 2016 at 22:18

    hahahaha such a plot twist! ;)

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